Friday, December 09, 2005
12/09/2005 08:36:00 AM
and my legs are getting weary
from treading water
in your pool of lies
I'm trying to keep my head up
to not be sucked into your undertow
but one thing I know
is that your pulling me down
binding me with invisible ties
and I'm falling under your gravity
and I'm waiting for peace
I'm waiting for release
from your chains that are keeping me
from the fear that plagues the heart of me
because I'm drowning in uncertainty
waiting for the heaviness to subside so I can breathe
because this fear that I fear
is exactly what I don't want to hear
that your arms without touch
are holding me; molding me
into someone I don't...can't want to be
but maybe that someone
is the something I need
In the blogger Poetry finals i give you first place, congratulations.
Thanks, I just had some thoughts floating around this morning that I felt like attempting to put into words.
I do kinda like this piece. I like how it starts out kinda negative like this guy is dragging her (and by her I mean the character in this) down and ruining everything, and you think it's like a bad relationship when really it's herself not allowing herself to fall in love and finally at the end maybe opening up to it?
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